Haze
Fearful
Confounded
Uncertain mind
Impulsive actions
Steps taken then retrieved
Blindly heeding conventions
Crazed sanity seeps deeper yet
Listless hesitation resolves none
Wait, be patient; in stillness answers come
05 December 2011 | ©Nel 2011
Side Note: An etheree for Thursday Poets Rally Week 57. While posting this, I realized it is somewhat relevant to this week’s photo challenge.
what a lovely word flow.
cool shape.
Thank you very much, The Cello Strings. :)
I love the poem. Great use of the form.
I’m glad you loved it, Bongo. Thank you. :)
Great rhythm. Last line is perfect.
Thank you, Bassa. :)
Beautiful. I wish I could remember this when I play!
Your compliment is much appreciated, Priya. Thank you. :)
ur words resemble a pyramid, likes :)
I’m glad you liked it, neha.
Thank you for dropping in. :)
Awesome!
Thank you, RW. :)
Good advice! ‘Crazed sanity…’, I like it :)
So glad you stopped by, magher1!
Thanks. :)
great shape poetry.
love the wit and reflective words shown here.
Happy Rally.
let us know by commenting once you have done 18 comments to your peers.
:)
Thanks, TOE.
I will once I’m done. I still have more to read. =)